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The cherry tree: Chapter 3

  • Jul. 9th, 2009 at 9:13 AM
Gato
Title: The cherry tree (3/?)
Pairing: Ohmiya
Summary: Nino doesn’t believe in spirits, but his opinion changes when he meets a very special person.
Rating: PG
Wordcount: 1336
Disclaimer: Thanks to [info]zazasukie for wrapping this chapter and to [info]beastlover for betaing it!  <3<3

Previous chapter

“See? I told you, didn’t I? He must be the spirit of the sakura tree!” Aiba insisted, munching his sandwich.

Nino averted his eyes from the school grounds and looked at his friend, sighing with exasperation. Since he had told Aiba about his encounter with the strange man in the park, his friend had been pestering him with the same thing over and over like some sort of crazy parrot.

“Aiba, I've told you a million times already that it’s impossible.” For the tenth time that hour, Nino tried to introduce a bit of sanity to his friends mind – and the fact that the previous nine attempts had failed wasn’t going to stop him from trying.

“B-but…”

“Though I must recognize that he behaved quite strangely when I met him, and he seemed a bit odd,” Nino continued with patience.

“But he disappeared and…” Aiba tried to interrupt him.

“Yes, and the fact he had disappeared when I woke up. Those things didn’t mean he had vanished into thin air because he’s a spirit. He probably had to leave while I was asleep and didn’t want to disturb my slumber,” he declared with a frown.

“But we didn’t find anything when we searched around!” the other student protested loudly. “And we didn’t find him either when we returned to the park the next day!”

“That doesn’t mean anything.”

“And the sakura flower?” Aiba asked persistently. “Don’t you find it strange that there was a sakura flower where he was sitting? It’s still winter and all the trees are leafless, in case you haven’t noticed!”

Nino squirmed uncomfortably leaning on the terrace’s rail, “Hmmmmm. There might be a good explanation for that,” he sighed and took his wallet out of the pocket of his school uniform, “I’m sure there is a rational explanation behind all of this… I only have to find it,” he murmured to himself gazing at the little sakura flower carefully displayed inside the wallet, in front of his student card.

~~


Nino didn’t meet the mysterious man again until half a month later, and it was almost by pure chance. That morning, he had had the intention to wake up earlier than he usually got up to attend Aiba’s last basketball match – his friend had pestered him for the whole week until Nino had finally agreed to go. Nevertheless, he ended waking up later than he wanted – playing video games until three o’clock in the morning didn’t have anything to do with that, seriously – so he had had to hurry to the basketball court.

He was running through the park when he glimpsed a familiar figure in a traditional kimono sitting near the sakura tree. Nino stopped abruptly and after debating with himself for a few minutes, he decided to approach the tree. He moved stealthy behind the bushes with the purpose of spying on what the mysterious man was doing this time.

The young man was sitting seiza-style on the grass, painting something on a big paper situated on a small table in front of him.

“Hello,” Ohno said without averting his eyes from his artwork.

“He-hello!” Nino said, surprised that the man had noticed him. “I was walking around when I glimpsed your kimono. I thought I should drop and say hi.”

Ohno looked at him with a small smile, “You were so silent that I almost didn’t notice you.”

Nino blushed a bit and stuttered, “I wanted to make sure that it was you but I didn’t want to scare you. I-I wasn’t spying on you or anything!” He blushed even more and quickly put his hand over his mouth to stop his blabbering. He looked nervously at Ohno, totally mortified at being caught red handed stalking him.

Ohno laughed heartily at Nino’s ashamed expression, but his laugh was cut short by a round of rough coughs. Nino looked at the man beside him with a worried expression, noticing for the first time his pale face.

“Are you ok?” he asked reaching for the man’s forehead. His hand stopped midway however, when he realized what he was doing. Ohno was almost a stranger after all. Wouldn’t it be too pretentious of him to treat the young man with such familiarity?

Ohno tilted his head, gazing at Nino curiously, like some sort of small puppy waiting for its master command. “So cute!” Nino’s hand continued its way anyway, almost against its owner's will – but only almost.

Once more, the young student felt entranced by the man’s smooth skin, but he frowned with worry when he sensed the unnatural heat. Could it be that Ohno was a bit feverish?

“I think you have a fever… Wouldn’t it be better if you rested a bit at your home?”

“Don’t worry. It’s only a slight cold,” Ohno assured the young student with a small smile, shrugging his shoulders. Like the last time Nino had touched him, he hadn’t make any attempt to get away from Nino.

“But…” Nino was starting to argue when he was interrupted by his cell phone. “Excuse me for a moment...” he said moving a few meters away to answer the call.

“Yes?”

“Nino! The match is about to start! Where are you?”. Nino removed the cell phone from his ear, trying to avoid being deafened by his friend’s excited shouts.

“Aiba? What the hell are you talking abo - Darn, the match!” Nino quickly hung up, turning around to look, embarrassed, at Ohno. “Sorry! I promised my friend I would go to watch his match! I have to leave now!” he hastily apologized, bowing slightly.

“Don’t worry. Tell your friend that I hope he wins, please.” Even though Ohno was smiling the whole time, his smile didn’t seem to reach his soft, brown eyes. It suddenly struck Nino that the young man looked a bit lonely there, surrounded by the leafless trees with his calligraphy work as his sole companion.

“Goodbye.” After bowing apologetically once more, the student ran towards the school as fast as he could, cursing his bad luck. “Now that I had the chance to talk to him again... Damn it!” Besides, Nino felt slightly guilty about leaving Ohno alone when he was feeling unwell, but he couldn’t help it, he had promised Aiba after all. “Anyway, I think that this sort things out, because it’s impossible for a spirit to get sick, right?”

~~

Unfortunately, some days later someone proved to Nino that he was greatly mistaken in his conceptions. The young student was strolling in the park after his school classes, hoping to be lucky enough to met Ohno again, if only by chance, when he saw an old woman praying near the old sakura tree.

Nino, full of curiosity, approached the old woman with a friendly smile.

“You’re asking yourself why this old woman is praying in front of the tree, aren’t you?” she asked him with a kind smile, noticing his curiosity.

“Well… yes!” Nino admitted, a bit embarrassed.

“I’m giving thanks to the spirit of the tree for all these years.”

“The spirit of the tree?”

“Yes, yes, I know young people don’t believe in these things anymore, but my family has always prayed him for help,” she affectionately patted the trunk of the old tree.

The woman sighed sadly, “I wonder how much longer this tree is going to last...”

“Eh?” Nino stared, surprised, at the woman.

“The poor thing is really old, and it hasn’t blossomed for years now,” the woman explained to him. “I suppose it must be ill.”

Suddenly, Nino remembered Ohno’s fever and his pale skin. “The tree is ill?...” he muttered looking closely at the old trunk. “If the tree is ill, the spirit of the tree would be ill too?” he worriedly asked the old woman

“Possibly,” the woman sighed again, shrugging her shoulders.

Nino bit his lower lip looking at the leafless tree, “Is it really a coincidence? Could it be... could it be that Ohno is really the spirit of the tree?”

Next chapter

Comments

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[info]pebblegosling wrote:
Jul. 9th, 2009 08:01 am (UTC)
"Nevertheless, he ended waking up later than he wanted – playing video games until three o’clock in the morning didn’t have anything to do with that, seriously"
hahaha, that's something I would say >.<;;;;

This story is great! Its got a pretty unique feel to it! (love ohno as a sakura tree spirit- dunno, it just suits him)
Nino...get some...urm...PLANT MEDICINE!!
[info]aidill wrote:
Jul. 11th, 2009 04:45 pm (UTC)
I would say it too! XD
I also think that being a sakura tree spirit fits Ohno strangely well! ^_____^
What will happen next? What's Nino going to do? You'll have to wait till next chapter! ^___~
Thanks a lot for reading and commenting!
(no subject) - [info]pebblegosling - Jul. 12th, 2009 06:13 am (UTC)
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(no subject) - [info]aidill - Jul. 12th, 2009 02:07 pm (UTC)
[info]ulilulelo wrote:
Jul. 9th, 2009 09:23 am (UTC)
update, yey !
I love nervous nino here. and ohno fit sakura tree image ~~
can't wait for next ^^
[info]aidill wrote:
Jul. 11th, 2009 04:48 pm (UTC)
I love him too! (That's why I usually put him in that kind of situations! XD)
Thank you very much for your comment!
[info]haruchaan wrote:
Jul. 9th, 2009 09:55 am (UTC)
So Ohno is really the spirit of the tree. But aw he's sick :'(
And that was sweet of Nino to get worried but still never break his promise with Aiba.
Ahh I can't wait to see where this will lead to. Interesting :D Hope you update more ^^
[info]aidill wrote:
Jul. 11th, 2009 04:51 pm (UTC)
Well, Aiba would have killed him if he had missed his match! XD
I'm glad you enjoyed this chapter!
I'll try to update soon!
Thanks for reading!
[info]jamasunda wrote:
Jul. 9th, 2009 11:34 am (UTC)
OMG :O
:OO
:OOO


♥♥♥♥♥

*waits for next chapter* D:
[info]aidill wrote:
Jul. 11th, 2009 04:51 pm (UTC)
^_______________________^

I hope you'll enjoy next chapter as well!
Thanks a lot for reading!
[info]maibachan wrote:
Jul. 9th, 2009 11:53 am (UTC)
Uwa~~~~~~~~~~h!!!!!
Ohno!!!!! Don't be sick!!!!!
Aidill....if you make me cry in this fic, I will have to hurt you:P
I love this!! It is so unique and full of awesomeness!!
I can't wait for the next chapter!!!
♥ ♥ ♥ ♥
[info]aidill wrote:
Jul. 11th, 2009 04:56 pm (UTC)
Don't cry pleaseeee! (this way you won't have to hurt me, right? XD)
I don't want to spoil you the story, so I'm not going to tell you what happens with Ohno's sickness for now... you'll have to wait till next chapter! ^___~

Thank you very much for your comment!
[info]arichan22 wrote:
Jul. 9th, 2009 12:05 pm (UTC)
yaaaaaaaaaaaaaaay
i've been waiting for this! :D
keep up the good work!
[info]aidill wrote:
Jul. 11th, 2009 04:57 pm (UTC)
I'm glad you liked this chapter! ^_________^
I'll try to update as soon as possible!
Thanks a lot for reading!
[info]deeya_ohmiya wrote:
Jul. 9th, 2009 12:16 pm (UTC)
Oh no, the tree is sick >0<
But they met again \(^_^)/..

Need more <333
[info]aidill wrote:
Jul. 11th, 2009 05:01 pm (UTC)
Poor old and sick tree...
What's Nino going to do now?
Will he meet Ohno again?
Dun dun duuuun!
Thank you very much for your comment!
[info]shadow_kick wrote:
Jul. 9th, 2009 01:19 pm (UTC)
Hmmm, do you think fertilizer will help ohno? I can just see Aiba taking a dump at the root of the tree and insisting that he's helping. :D

Also, <333333333333333

MORE PLEASE MORE MORE. *offers heart-shaped cookies*
[info]aidill wrote:
Jul. 11th, 2009 05:04 pm (UTC)
Maybe... who knows? ^____~
At least he would be trying to help, wouldn't he? XD
I'll try to update soon! *writing next chapter while munching the heart-shaped cookies*
Thanks a lot for reading!
[info]lilazngrl11794 wrote:
Jul. 9th, 2009 02:46 pm (UTC)
wowies :) this fic is getting pretty interesting :D
does nino finally believe that spirits exist o-0?
[info]aidill wrote:
Jul. 11th, 2009 05:07 pm (UTC)
Nino is beginning to believe in them... Aiba would be so thrilled! XD
I'm happy you like my new fic! ^_________^
Thank you very much for your comment!
[info]thetagal13 wrote:
Jul. 9th, 2009 02:51 pm (UTC)
Is Oh-chan sick? Im sure showering Nino's love on the tree would solve the problem! *being optimistic* Thanks for the fic! =)
[info]aidill wrote:
Jul. 11th, 2009 05:08 pm (UTC)
Nino's love can heal anything, specially his Oh-chan! ♥
Thanks a lot for reading!
[info]madisonfink wrote:
Jul. 9th, 2009 04:33 pm (UTC)
Awww! Go get some uh....What do you get for trees when they're sick?

Nonetheless you should bring it some ramen! ^.^ I love the chapter can't wait for more
[info]aidill wrote:
Jul. 11th, 2009 05:12 pm (UTC)
I don't really know... plant medicine? :S

Hahaha! I don't know if watering the roots of the tree with ramen will help... but next chapter we'll know what's Nino going to do respect Oh-chan's sickness! ^________^
I'm really happy you enjoyed this chapter!
Thank you very much for your comment!
(no subject) - [info]madisonfink - Jul. 11th, 2009 05:38 pm (UTC)
(no subject) - [info]aidill - Jul. 11th, 2009 05:45 pm (UTC)
(no subject) - [info]madisonfink - Jul. 11th, 2009 06:01 pm (UTC)
[info]maryfeamnos wrote:
Jul. 9th, 2009 05:37 pm (UTC)
Hola Aidill
Esta muy bueno el capiii
Pobre Ohno esta enfermo U.U
en verdad es el espiritu del Arbol?
espero Nino lo pueda ayudar ...
Me gusto el capii
aki esperamos el proximo capiiii
♥___♥
Bendiciones
[info]aidill wrote:
Jul. 11th, 2009 05:13 pm (UTC)
Hola!
Me alegro de que te haya gustado! ^_______^
Esperemos que Ohno no esté demasiado enfermo... pero quizás Nino haga algo al respecto en el próximo capítulo! ^___~
Gracias por tu comentario!
(no subject) - [info]madisonfink - Jul. 11th, 2009 06:02 pm (UTC)
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[info]zukkoke_iero wrote:
Jul. 9th, 2009 07:43 pm (UTC)
Damn aiba!
You're an obstacle,
XD
Sakura no kizuna,
Strong bond between sakura tree and its spirit-wearing kimono- DAMN!

You sure know how to make me falling in love with your stories!
>//<
Now it's your fault that i can't wait for next chap!
Update soon pls!pls!pls!pls!
[info]aidill wrote:
Jul. 11th, 2009 05:18 pm (UTC)
Hahahaha! I laughed a lot with your comment!
Specially this part: "Damn Aiba! You're an obstacle!" XD
But poor boy, he only wanted Nino to watch his match, he didn't know that he was going to become an obstacle in Nino's meeting with Ohno! XD
>////< I'm really happy you enjoy my crazy plots!
I'll try to update soon! ^_______^
Thanks a lot for reading!
[info]a_mbry0 wrote:
Jul. 9th, 2009 08:12 pm (UTC)
awww so sweet!
Ohno really is the spirit of the tree and he's sick.. poor Oh-chan :((
i hope everything is gonna turn well ^_____^
can't wait the next chapter!<3
[info]aidill wrote:
Jul. 11th, 2009 05:20 pm (UTC)
Poor Ohno, he is sick and alone in the park T___T
But I'm sure that Nino is planning to do something to mend the situation! ^________^
Thank you very much for your comment!
[info]skyhorse8 wrote:
Jul. 9th, 2009 08:56 pm (UTC)
♥♥♥♥♥♥
[info]aidill wrote:
Jul. 11th, 2009 05:21 pm (UTC)
^________^
I'm glad you enjoyed this chapter!
Thanks for reading!
[info]kkastic wrote:
Jul. 9th, 2009 10:27 pm (UTC)
moar please =3 <33
[info]aidill wrote:
Jul. 11th, 2009 05:23 pm (UTC)
^_______^
I'll try to update soon!
Thank you for reading!
[info]yoshiblack16 wrote:
Jul. 9th, 2009 11:23 pm (UTC)
update!!!

poor Oh-chan he sick:( hope Nino helps him get better.

I'll be waiting for more
[info]aidill wrote:
Jul. 11th, 2009 05:22 pm (UTC)
He surely is planning to do something to mend the situation! ^_____^b
But you'll have to wait till next chapter to know what will happen! ^____~
Thanks a lot for your comment!
[info]aibakawaii wrote:
Jul. 10th, 2009 01:36 am (UTC)
Awes Ohno~ But I'm sure with Nino's love he will get better! :D
♥♥♥♥♥
[info]aidill wrote:
Jul. 11th, 2009 05:28 pm (UTC)
I'm sure of it too! ♥
Next chapter you'll see what's Nino going to do regarding this situation!
Thanks a lot for your comment!
[info]sakuyaz wrote:
Jul. 10th, 2009 06:01 am (UTC)
LOL!! Someone get some miracle grow stat!! XDD

Ahh..but joking aside..I love this fic. I truely do..it's unique and it's very interesting. Keep it up!! I'll be waiting for the next one!! :D ~♥♥♥
[info]aidill wrote:
Jul. 11th, 2009 05:30 pm (UTC)
>////< I'm really happy you liked this plot!
I'll try to update as soon as possible! ^___^
Thanks a lot for reading and commenting!
[info]cherry_armrest wrote:
Jul. 10th, 2009 11:24 am (UTC)
shockunoooooooo. Ohno, get better!
[info]aidill wrote:
Jul. 11th, 2009 05:32 pm (UTC)
I'm sure that Nino is going to do something to heal Oh-chan! ^____^
But you'll have to wait till next chapter to know it for sure! XD
Thanks a lot for reading!
[info]frksofa wrote:
Jul. 10th, 2009 03:22 pm (UTC)
Chapter 3:D

Noo, he's sick? I hope Ohno doesn't die (do spirits die anyway? hmmm)

aaaw, he took care of the sakura flower... that was probably a really special gift, seeing as Ohno's ill^^

once again, this is really interesting^_^ aah I look forward to the next ch:)
[info]aidill wrote:
Jul. 11th, 2009 05:37 pm (UTC)
I wonder that too... and I'm sure that Nino is asking himself the same thing! ^___~
Perhaps he can do something to try to help Ohno?

I was impossible for Nino to leave the little flower behind! After all, its the only thing that he had to remember his special meeting with Oh-chan! ♥

I'm really happy you enjoyed this chapter!

Thank very much for your comment!
[info]varziel wrote:
Jul. 10th, 2009 06:58 pm (UTC)
♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

Ohno's ill... D: Noo, please get better!
Aww, nervous Nino is so cute hehe.

Thanks for updating, been waiting for this!
I'll wait patiently for the next chapter :D :D
[info]aidill wrote:
Jul. 11th, 2009 05:40 pm (UTC)
Hahaha! Nervous Nino is always adorable! ♥
Can Nino helps Ohno to get better? You'll have to wait till next chapter to know what happens! ^___~
I'll try to update soon!
Thanks a lot for reading!
[info]iloveninomiya wrote:
Jul. 12th, 2009 10:19 am (UTC)
aww..i can't wait for another update..^^

really love nino here!!! XD
[info]aidill wrote:
Jul. 12th, 2009 01:56 pm (UTC)
He's really cute trying to spy on Ohno, right? ^___~
Thanks a lot for reading!
[info]sakuradanielle wrote:
Jul. 15th, 2009 01:05 am (UTC)
Oi! <333 So cute.. And Nino worries.. Aweee. Update soon k? I am become addicted to this series.
[info]aidill wrote:
Jul. 15th, 2009 07:13 am (UTC)
I'm really happy you enjoyed this series! Worried Nino is so cute, isn't he? ^______^
I'll try to update soon!
Thanks a lot for your comment!
[info]rio_sora wrote:
Jul. 18th, 2009 08:27 am (UTC)
ah...i hope nino can see ohno more,
i like ur story,
keep it on!!!
thanks!!!
[info]aidill wrote:
Jul. 18th, 2009 04:07 pm (UTC)
I promise you they will meet in the next chapter! ^___~
Thanks a lot for reading!
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