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The cherry tree: Chapter 2

  • Jun. 24th, 2009 at 10:05 AM
Gato
Title: The cherry tree (2/?)
Pairing: Ohmiya
Summary: Nino doesn’t believe in spirits, but his opinion changes when he meets a very special person.
Rating: PG
Wordcount: 1230
Disclaimer: The plot is mine, and the wrapping is thanks to [info]zazasukie. This chapter has been betaed by [info]beastlover . Thanks a lot!!   ^___^

Previous chapter

During the next few days, Nino couldn’t stop thinking about the mysterious stranger, to the point of being unable to concentrate on anything else. His curiosity getting the best of him. After that first encounter, they had returned to the park a few more times, trying to find that odd man again, but without any success.

“Maybe it was a figment of our imagination?” Nino wondered that night laying on his bed. The whole scene had felt like a dream. The morning fog rising from the lake at dawn, the soft breeze rippling the quiet waters, the young man’s calm face and the peace that seemed to surround him. . .almost like an ancient painting of breathtaking beauty. He sighed remembering it. Then he realized what he was doing and almost slapped himself. “For God’s sake! Where did all this poetic nonsense come from? In any case, this is stupid. I’m getting obsessed with a stranger I’ve seen just once. It’s true he disappeared in a very mysterious way, but to think that he is a spirit is just idiotic. I’ve had enough! Tomorrow is the last day I’m going to try to find him!” Nino decided turning off the lights.

That Saturday morning, he got up early and prepared some food, planning to enjoy a small picnic in the park. “If this time is going to be the last one, I’m going to try my best,” he thought firmly. He packed the food and some drinks in a basket, and after thinking about it for a few minutes, he included his DS too. Aiba had basketball practice that morning so it would be better if he brought something to amuse himself with while waiting for him.

It was so early in the morning that the park was almost deserted. Nino reached the old sakura tree and sat down facing the lake with his back resting against its trunk, like the strange man had done when they saw him. The weather was exceptionally warm that morning and Nino, who hadn’t slept well that night and had gotten up really early in the morning to prepare the food, began to feel sleepier with each passing second. The tree’s trunk was surprisingly comfortable and the splash of the small waves against the shore of the lake sounded like a lullaby. For a few minutes Nino tried his best to resist, but he finally fell asleep under the leafless branches of the tree.

He was awakened by the soft murmur of clothes ruffling beside him. He slowly opened his eyes, searching for the source of the sound… and found a pair of brown, almond-shaped eyes looking at him with interest.

“Wha-what!” he exclaimed opening his eyes wide, quickly trying to move backwards, but the trunk of the sakura tree stopped him.

“Hello.”

The mysterious young man he had been searching for like a crazy fool during the last two weeks was beside him! Nino almost couldn’t believe it.

“Forgive me, I didn’t want to wake you up,” the stranger apologized politely.

“Please, don’t worry about it,” Nino answered with his heart pounding strongly in his chest. He took the chance to look at him more closely, trying to find something that could tell him if the man in front of him was a spirit or not. He was short, even shorter than him, and even in the kimono, Nino could see that his figure was slim and his body well-toned. His black hair stood up in small spikes, giving him the appearance of a child that had just got out of bed, and he had the most gorgeous Japanese features Nino had ever seen. He didn’t seem to have a bag or a backpack with him, only his kimono and his traditional sandals... as if he had just appeared from nowhere.

“Do you mind if I sit down here?” the stranger asked tilting his head and pointing at the place beside Nino, apparently oblivious to the boy's intense inspection.

“Of-of course not!” Nino stuttered moving his basket out of the way.

The young man sat down beside him and fixed his eyes in the lake without another word. A minute later, he averted his eyes from the water and looked at the bewildered student expectantly.

“What’s your name?” he asked in a soft voice.

“Ni-Ninomiya Kazunari! And yours?”

“Ohno Satoshi. Pleased to meet you,” Ohno smiled and held out his hand to Nino.

Nino eyed warily the other man’s hand and held out his own hesitantly, almost expecting to pass through it. “His skin feels rather normal to the touch... ”. The other man’s hand was small and elegant, almost feminine, and his skin was warm and incredibly soft. Nino was so mesmerized by the contrast between Ohno’s long, slender fingers and his own short ones that he didn’t realize he had been holding the other’s hand longer than could be considered polite.

“I don't think I have seen you before. Do you come here often?” Ohno asked cutting through Nino’s thoughts, without any attempt to remove his hand from Nino’s.

“N-no… and you?” Nino blushed with embarrassment and released the other’s hand.

“Oh, I’m usually around here,” the man answered vaguely with a small smile.

Nino smiled back at him. They spent the next minutes in companionable silence, the mysterious man watching the quiet waters and Nino observing him discreetly.

The student was going to ask something when he was interrupted by the loud grumblings of his stomach. Ohno averted his eyes from the lake and smiled at him with a slightly interrogative expression. Nino felt his cheeks redden and hurriedly turned around to grab his lunch.

He was taking his bento out of the basket when he noticed the curious gaze of the other man.

“Do you want to try one of these?” He asked shyly, offering him a rice ball.

“Of course,” Ohno answered softly and reached his hand towards Nino’s. He looked interestedly at the rice ball and then bit it carefully.

“Umai!” he exclaimed delighted and bit the rice ball again.

Nino laughed and offered the happy man a croquette from his own bento. If Ohno was a spirit, he sure was a hungry one.

They ate the food together enjoying their own company. It was strange, but Nino felt completely at ease with Ohno, as if he had known him for years. The student chatted animatedly about his studies, his school, and his crazy friend Aiba. Ohno talked about the hidden techniques behind the ancient art of calligraphy – a theme that seemed to entrance him.

Enjoying the warmth of the sunrays on his skin and the soft voice of his newly found friend, Nino felt so relaxed that he fell asleep once more without even noticing it. He woke up a few minutes later when he heard the voice of his friend Aiba calling for him.

“Sorry Nino, my basketball practice lasted longer than I expected! Ah! Were you sleeping? How strange of you to fall asleep alone in the middle of the park!”

Alone? What was Aiba saying? He wasn’t alone, he was with Ohno, the strange man they’d been searching for during the past two weeks, wasn’t he? He quickly turned around and discovered to his surprise that Ohno had disappeared again without trace. In his place, a small sakura blossom lay on the grass.

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[info]thetagal13 wrote:
Jun. 24th, 2009 08:57 am (UTC)
They met! Yay! Cant wait to see what gonna happen next...

Thanks!
[info]aidill wrote:
Jun. 25th, 2009 02:08 pm (UTC)
Nino is so lucky to have finally found Ohno, isn't he? ^_____^
Thanks a lot for reading!
[info]ct_zahra87 wrote:
Jun. 24th, 2009 09:18 am (UTC)
Love it...
Can't wait for the development...
Thanks for updating...
[info]aidill wrote:
Jun. 25th, 2009 02:09 pm (UTC)
I'm glad you like their first encounter! ^____^
What will happen next? Will they meet again? Dun dun duuuuuun
Thank you for your comment!
[info]zukkoke_iero wrote:
Jun. 24th, 2009 09:48 am (UTC)
Wah, they met!
And i love that you make him wearing kimono,
I always love mens in kimono...
XD
[info]aidill wrote:
Jun. 25th, 2009 02:09 pm (UTC)
I love them too! Ohno looks specially good in one! ^___~
Thank a lot for your comment!
[info]batrisya_85 wrote:
Jun. 24th, 2009 10:44 am (UTC)
yay~~ they met .. <3 Nino was waiting and he came!! :) love it when you put "umai" there.. after all, the ghost is still Ohno right.. "umai" is his trademark.. :)

nice! waiting for further update~ <3 ganbatte ne!thanks for the story~
[info]aidill wrote:
Jun. 25th, 2009 02:10 pm (UTC)
Hahahaha! After all, that's Ohno trademark, isn't it? XD
Nino has finally met Oh-chan... but he left leaving behind only a cherry flower. What does it mean?

Thank you very much for reading!
(no subject) - [info]batrisya_85 - Jun. 25th, 2009 02:15 pm (UTC)
(no subject) - [info]aidill - Jun. 25th, 2009 02:25 pm (UTC)
[info]maibachan wrote:
Jun. 24th, 2009 11:29 am (UTC)
Ohmiya share a bento <333333333
*sigh* I am going to have happy thoughts now ^___^
*Avidly waiting for the next installment*
[info]aidill wrote:
Jun. 25th, 2009 02:10 pm (UTC)
I'm sure they looked really cute sharing it! ^___~ (I'm biased XD)
I'll try to update as soon as possible!
Thanks a lot for reading!
[info]ulilulelo wrote:
Jun. 24th, 2009 11:44 am (UTC)
update! yay..
they met and already talk to each other..
can't wait for the development :)
more please <3
[info]aidill wrote:
Jun. 25th, 2009 02:11 pm (UTC)
Nino has finally found Ohno (and has even shared his bento with him! ^____~), but what will happen next?
Thanks a lot for reading!
[info]haruchaan wrote:
Jun. 24th, 2009 12:09 pm (UTC)
Awww. So cute &hearts

I wonder what Ohno really is. And how he keeps on disappearing. :D Can't wait to read more!
[info]aidill wrote:
Jun. 25th, 2009 02:11 pm (UTC)
Nino want to know it too! ^___~
But don't worry, he will try his best to discover it!
Thank you very much for your comment!
[info]fara_wakeshima wrote:
Jun. 24th, 2009 12:13 pm (UTC)
kyaaaaaa! u mada my day brighter!

i wonder wat happen nex. got no clue at all to guess.T_T

thanx for this update. i will wait for the nex one.

hugsssssss
[info]aidill wrote:
Jun. 25th, 2009 02:12 pm (UTC)
Hahaha! I'm glad you enjoyed this chapter! ^___^ *hugs back*
I'll try to update as soon as possible!
Thanks a lot for reading!
[info]legsinthepond wrote:
Jun. 24th, 2009 12:16 pm (UTC)
Wow... yay, new chapter. I love how Oh-chan is so peaceful... it's almost mesmerising - no wonder Nino is drawn in... And the bento and the flower left behind :-D Thanks, and I'll wait impatiently for the next chapter.
[info]aidill wrote:
Jun. 25th, 2009 02:12 pm (UTC)
Hahaha! I'm also mesmerized by Oh-chan's calmness! ^___^b
Thanks for reading and commenting!
[info]jamasunda wrote:
Jun. 24th, 2009 01:53 pm (UTC)
OMG!!

I LOVE THIS ♥♥!!! 8Dv Consider yourself priveleged XD I just got myself a laptop and this is the first thing I comment on on it 8DDD

AND DAMN, I LOVED IT. <333333333333
[info]aidill wrote:
Jun. 25th, 2009 02:13 pm (UTC)
>///< I'm happy you liked this chapter! ^____________^
Thanks a lot for using your new laptop to comment in my fic! (I consider myself really privileged! XD)
[info]lilazngrl11794 wrote:
Jun. 24th, 2009 02:31 pm (UTC)
omg they met ♥ but then he disappeared...NOT NICE D;
next chapter please :)
[info]aidill wrote:
Jun. 25th, 2009 02:13 pm (UTC)
Poor Nino who woke up alone in the park... but he had met Ohno after searching for him during two weeks so he is really lucky! ^___^
Thanks a lot for reading!
[info]madisonfink wrote:
Jun. 24th, 2009 03:53 pm (UTC)
ah~

Such a sweet encounter!

Can't wait for the next chapter.
[info]aidill wrote:
Jun. 25th, 2009 02:16 pm (UTC)
^_____________^ It's a pity that it has ended so soon, but at least Nino has found him! ^_____~
Thank you very much for your comment!
[info]maryfeamnos wrote:
Jun. 24th, 2009 05:12 pm (UTC)
Hola ^^

Ahhh Nino s obseciono con el misterioso chico
tanto asi que por 2 semanas siempre lo busco y nada
pero que bueno que si logro encontrarlo ahhh
se nota que se quedo emocionado es que Ohno♥ estan lindo♥
compartieron una conversa y su bento... pero porque desaparecio y solo dejo un flor de cerezooo ^^
ahora que hara Nino♥ ... le contara a Aiba-chan
Muy lindo capiiiii esperando el proximo capiii
Bendiciones
[info]aidill wrote:
Jun. 25th, 2009 02:18 pm (UTC)
Por fin se han encontrado! ^_____^
Una lástima que su encuentro haya durado tan poco... pero bueno, ya veremos que pasa en el siguiente capítulo! :3
[info]varziel wrote:
Jun. 24th, 2009 05:18 pm (UTC)
They meet! They talk! They touch! They share food 8D
Aww I love this series, I can't wait for the next chapt. I bet it's going to be interesting! ♥ ♥
[info]aidill wrote:
Jun. 25th, 2009 02:18 pm (UTC)
Hahaha! Great synopsis for this chapter! <3
I'm really happy you like the story and I hope you like next chapter as well!
Thanks a lot for reading!
[info]smile_as_a_noun wrote:
Jun. 24th, 2009 07:16 pm (UTC)
I really like this so far. This chapter was really cute ^^
Nino falling asleep under a tree with Oh-chan, I can totally picture it. And the flower thing at the end was really sweet. I can't wait for the next chapter!
<3
[info]aidill wrote:
Jun. 25th, 2009 02:18 pm (UTC)
I can picture it too! So cute together~
What will happen next? Dun dun duuuuun
Thank you very much for your comment!
[info]frksofa wrote:
Jun. 25th, 2009 12:23 am (UTC)
Yay! chapter 2:D
They finally meet...
I loved it^-^ (haha, especially the Umai part xD)
looking forward to the next chapter now :D
[info]aidill wrote:
Jun. 25th, 2009 02:19 pm (UTC)
Everything is Umai for Oh-chan! Specially if Nino has cooked it! ^___~
I'll try to update as soon as possible!
Thanks a lot for reading!
[info]deeya_ohmiya wrote:
Jun. 25th, 2009 01:38 am (UTC)
Ohno disappeared but I hope they will meet again..
Waiting to read more (^_^)..
[info]aidill wrote:
Jun. 25th, 2009 02:19 pm (UTC)
They will surely meet again! After all, Nino has still to determine if Oh-chan is a spirit or not! ^____~ (I'm sure that this isn't his only reason for searching for Ohno! XD)
Thanks a lot for your comment!
[info]citlecrewolf wrote:
Jun. 25th, 2009 01:55 am (UTC)
That was sweet! Is it strange that I like Ohno's hands to? *lol* Thanks, looking forward to the next chapter :)
[info]aidill wrote:
Jun. 25th, 2009 02:19 pm (UTC)
I love his hands! And his arms, and his nose, and his eyes... and... (well, I think you get the idea! XD)
Thank you very much for your comment!
[info]arichan22 wrote:
Jun. 25th, 2009 02:34 am (UTC)
aaaaaaaaah~
so interesting!
cant w8 for chapter 3 :D
[info]aidill wrote:
Jun. 25th, 2009 02:20 pm (UTC)
I'm glad you liked it!
I'll try to update as soon as possible!
Thanks a lot for reading!
[info]darkeyes2 wrote:
Jun. 25th, 2009 05:52 am (UTC)
ohno !!! yay! cant wait for next chap!! so cool!! will jun and sho appear soon?
[info]aidill wrote:
Jun. 25th, 2009 02:20 pm (UTC)
I don't want to spoil you the story, but I can guarantee you that they will make an appearance!
Thanks a lot for reading!
[info]crafty381 wrote:
Jun. 26th, 2009 04:50 am (UTC)
you're back *throws confetti* lol i'm loving the plot alot!!!
can't wait to read more (^o^)
[info]aidill wrote:
Jun. 26th, 2009 03:03 pm (UTC)
^___________^ *waves*
I hope you enjoy next chapter as well!
Thanks a lot for your comment!
[info]beastlover wrote:
Jun. 29th, 2009 04:19 am (UTC)
Hey. I'm back so I can beta this for you. If you could email it to me, that would be great. I haven't read it yet.
[info]aidill wrote:
Jun. 29th, 2009 08:27 pm (UTC)
Hi! ^______^
I've sent you this chapter. I hope you like it! ^____~
[info]a_mbry0 wrote:
Jun. 29th, 2009 09:15 pm (UTC)
oooh so good, i like this<3
Nino and ohno met already but Oh-chan disappeared suddenly as last time..
i'm curious to know what's gonna happen next 8DD
[info]aidill wrote:
Jun. 30th, 2009 06:36 pm (UTC)
I'm really happy you liked this chapter! ^__^
What will happen next? Dun dun duuuuun

Thanks a lot for reading!
[info]sakuradanielle wrote:
Jun. 30th, 2009 04:10 am (UTC)
I am loving this <3 update soon k?
[info]aidill wrote:
Jun. 30th, 2009 06:45 pm (UTC)
>///< Thanks!
I'll try to update soon! ^___~

Thanks a lot for your comment!
[info]iloveninomiya wrote:
Jul. 1st, 2009 08:11 am (UTC)

it's me again! can't wait for another update!!!!!!!!!

another great fanfic of yours!!!
[info]aidill wrote:
Jul. 1st, 2009 09:29 am (UTC)
>///< Thanks!!
I'll try to update soon! ^___~
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