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The cherry tree: Chapter 1

  • Jun. 18th, 2009 at 11:24 AM
Gato
Title: The cherry tree (1/?)
Pairing: Ohmiya
Summary: Nino doesn’t believe in spirits, but his opinion changes when he meets a very special person.
Rating: PG
Wordcount: 1003
Disclaimer: The plot is mine, and the wrapping is thanks to [info]zazasukie. Thanks a lot to [info]beastlover for betaing this fic!  (Thank you both! ♥)


“But why not Nino? Why not?” Aiba asked frowning at his friend.

“Aiba, those stories are obviously for children. It’s impossible that magical beings exist in the real world.”, Nino sighed tiredly, trying to explain why he didn’t believe in the existence of the spirits of ancient Japanese folklore to his best friend for the umpteenth time.

They had met in the opening ceremony of their high school, a few years ago. It had been friendship at first sight, or that’s what Aiba always said. The truth was that Aiba bumped into Nino, making the younger boy drop the can of juice he had just bought, while he was running to the ceremony. Nino hadn’t been exactly delighted with Aiba at that moment but, when the clumsy boy returned carrying five different juices for Nino, the latter couldn’t help but reconsider his opinion about his new classmate. From then on, their friendship didn't ever stop growing; they had become best friends.

“How could a fox or a raccoon possibly be able to talk or to transform into a person?” he asked exasperated.

“Because they have powers!” the young man replied clearly frustrated by his friend’s disbelief. “And they aren’t raccoons!”

“Yeah, and everybody knows that those fox-ish beings become more and more powerful with each extra tail they grow and blah, blah, blah,” Nino said with a dismissive gesture and unchained his bicycle.

When he turned around, pulling his bicycle, he found Aiba looking at him with a sulky pout.

“But they are real!” he heard him mutter when they were leaving the school grounds.

~~

A few days later, Nino was quietly enjoying his sandwich on the school’s terrace when the sudden bang of the metal entrance door against the wall almost gave him a heart attack.

He looked up, surprised, at his best friend who ran towards him madly waving his arms.

“Have you heard the latest rumors?!” Aiba asked excitedly as soon as he reached his side.

“What rumors?” Nino asked, a bit curious, leaving his half-eaten sandwich aside.

“You know the big old sakura tree in the middle of the park? One of our classmates swears that he saw the spirit of the tree yesterday at dusk!” Aiba exclaimed looking at him delightedly. “I told you, didn’t I? Spirits do exist!”

“Aiba…”

“The whole school is talking about it! Some of our classmates are even planning to go to the park this evening to try to find it!”

Nino sighed, “Aiba, that’s…”

“We’re going to go too, right Nino?” Aiba looked at him with his best puppy eyes.

Nino looked at his best friend’s eager face and sighed again. He knew that he had lost the battle this time.

“O.k.”

“YAY!”

“But I can’t go today,” Nino warned him.

“It’s ok, we can go tomorrow morning!”


~~


The next morning, Aiba and a very grumpy Nino – he had never been a morning person and being woken by his noisy friend two hours earlier than he usually got up hadn’t done anything to improve his mood - arrived at the park’s entrance in search of the famous spirit.

“So where is that damned tree?” asked Nino with a frown, rubbing his hands to warm them in the chilly weather.

“Near the small lake,” Aiba answered smiling excitedly, “Do you think we’ll be able to find him now that there is nobody around?”

“Hmmmff,” Nino didn’t bother to answer him.

Both friends kept walking in silence through the deserted park towards the old sakura tree. They had almost reached the place, when they were surprised by the sudden appearance of a young man dressed in a traditional kimono from behind the broad trunk of the sakura tree.

“Look, there’s a man over there. Hel…mmmppppfff!”

“Shhhh!” Aiba silenced his friend by putting his hand over his mouth and dragged him behind some bushes.

The strange, dark-haired man didn’t seem to notice their presence and sat down facing the lake with his back resting against the trunk of the old tree.

“It’s him! It’s him! The spirit of the sakura tree!” Aiba whispered excitedly taking his hand off of Nino’s mouth.

“Don’t be stupid!” Nino hissed furiously at him trying to stand up.

“Shhhh! Not too loud or he’ll hear you!” Aiba whispered frantically and pulled on Nino’s wrist to keep him hidden behind the bushes. “Let’s observe him!” the young man proposed with a bright glint in his eyes.

“This is idiotic,” Nino shook his head in disbelief but didn’t try to stand up again.

They spent the following minutes carefully observing the stranger from their hideout. The young man didn’t move at all; he simply observed the morning light reflecting on the lake’s surface with a calm face.

After twenty minutes of observation, Nino found himself strangely drawn to the stranger’s blank expression and the peaceful aura that surrounded him. He shook his head to try to clear his thoughts and decided that it was time to end their pointless activity.

“Well, this is really interesting but it’s getting late and we need to be at school on time,” he complained, looking at his friend.

“But… but…” Aiba looked at him with a disappointed expression.

“But nothing! We’ve better things to do than stalk a stranger,” Nino said resolutely and stood up, leaving their hideout.

“Nino!” he heard Aiba gasping behind him.

“What?” he asked turning around.

Aiba was pointing at the small lake with a shocked expression, “Look!”

When Nino looked where Aiba was pointing, he discovered, shocked, that the odd man had disappeared without leaving any trace.

“It can’t be!” he exclaimed, astonished, and ran towards the old sakura tree. He looked around bewildered, trying to find some trace of the young man, but he couldn’t find anything. It was as if he had vanished into thin air.

“So the rumor was true. He was the spirit of the sakura tree, after all,” he heard Aiba whispering in awe behind him.

Nino felt a shiver run down his spine.

Next chapter

Comments

( 44 comments — Leave a comment )
[info]rio_sora wrote:
Jun. 18th, 2009 10:06 am (UTC)
ah, i'm first?
yea~new fic~
interesting!
can't wait for the next chapter!
go spirit!
[info]aidill wrote:
Jun. 18th, 2009 02:43 pm (UTC)
Welcome to this new series! ^___^

Who is that mysterious dark-haired man dressed in a traditional kimono? Is he really the spirit of the old cherry tree?
Dun dun duuuuuuuuun!

Thanks a lot for reading!
[info]thetagal13 wrote:
Jun. 18th, 2009 10:25 am (UTC)
Nice story... Cant wait to see what happens. Thanks!
[info]aidill wrote:
Jun. 18th, 2009 02:45 pm (UTC)
Hahaha! Who knows what will happen next? But I warn you: there are some surprises ahead! ^__~
Thanks a lot for reading my new series!
[info]zukkoke_iero wrote:
Jun. 18th, 2009 10:36 am (UTC)
Oooh!
New series!!
An about ghost again! ^^v
Hope the spirit in cherry tree is oh chan...
Oh he's a shaman?
Hahahaha..
So interesting!
Wanna read more!
>,<
Great!
[info]aidill wrote:
Jun. 18th, 2009 02:48 pm (UTC)
Who is that mysterious man? Is he really the spirit of the cherry tree? (Is he Oh-chan? XD)
I'll try to update soon!
Thanks a lot for your comment!
[info]haruchaan wrote:
Jun. 18th, 2009 10:36 am (UTC)
A new fic! That's interesting. :D
I'll be following this series too! ^^b
[info]aidill wrote:
Jun. 18th, 2009 02:51 pm (UTC)
Welcome! *waves*
I hope you enjoy this new series! ^___^

Thank you very much for reading!
[info]cherry_armrest wrote:
Jun. 18th, 2009 10:50 am (UTC)
Ooh. Will the spirit have a tail too? Because that'd be really cute :)

Looking forward to the next! :DD
[info]aidill wrote:
Jun. 18th, 2009 02:53 pm (UTC)
Hahaha! Maybe... or maybe not! But he is mysterious, ne? ^___~
What will happen next? Will they find again that strange man?
Dun dun duuuuuuuuun!

Thanks a lot for your comment!
[info]ct_zahra87 wrote:
Jun. 18th, 2009 12:21 pm (UTC)
Yay....
A new series to stalk...hehe..
Creepy nee...
Anyway... This is interesting...
Another ghostly story...
love it alot...
Thanks for sharing..
[info]aidill wrote:
Jun. 18th, 2009 02:57 pm (UTC)
I'm glad you think the beginning of my new series is interesting and I hope you like the next chapter as well! ^___^

Thanks a lot for reading!

Btw, you're not creepy! ^___~
[info]anissyuk wrote:
Jun. 18th, 2009 12:50 pm (UTC)
Yeayyy!!! new fic again~~~
[info]aidill wrote:
Jun. 18th, 2009 02:58 pm (UTC)
^______________^

Yep, it was time, ne?

Thanks a lot for reading!
[info]a_mbry0 wrote:
Jun. 18th, 2009 03:35 pm (UTC)
omm this seems interesting and really mysterious! :D
thank you for this! ^__^
[info]aidill wrote:
Jun. 19th, 2009 07:35 am (UTC)
Hahaha! Who is that mysterious man? How did he disappear so suddenly? Did spirits really exist?
Dun dun duuuuuun!

Thank you very much for your comment!
[info]madisonfink wrote:
Jun. 18th, 2009 03:39 pm (UTC)
AH!

I love it!

More pwease!
[info]aidill wrote:
Jun. 19th, 2009 07:34 am (UTC)
^_____________^ I'm glad you like my new series!

I'll try to update as soon as possible!
Thanks a lot for reading!
[info]madisonfink wrote:
Jun. 19th, 2009 02:54 pm (UTC)
No prob!
[info]shadow_kick wrote:
Jun. 18th, 2009 03:51 pm (UTC)
Ahh! New series, yummy :D

And the first chapter is so interesting alr. I'll be following this series!

Thanks for sharing!
[info]aidill wrote:
Jun. 19th, 2009 07:34 am (UTC)
Yep, a new series!! (though initially it was a one-shot :3 ), but I warn you that there will be surprises ahead!
Thanks a lot for your comment!
[info]batrisya_85 wrote:
Jun. 18th, 2009 04:06 pm (UTC)
wow~~interesting... spirits ne!! wah.. mystery :) <3 can't wait for the next update! :) ganbatte ne!! thanks for the story.. XD
[info]aidill wrote:
Jun. 19th, 2009 07:33 am (UTC)
My first fic was based in ghosts, this one is based in the spirits of the ancient Japanese folklore... who knows the theme of my next series! XD

I'll try to update soon!
Thank you very much for reading!
[info]jamasunda wrote:
Jun. 18th, 2009 04:14 pm (UTC)
OMG.







♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥
[info]aidill wrote:
Jun. 19th, 2009 07:32 am (UTC)
^_______________^

A new series... based again in something supernatural! XD

Thanks a lot for your comment!
[info]deeya_ohmiya wrote:
Jun. 18th, 2009 05:26 pm (UTC)
You write a new fic, yatta \(^_^)/..
Looks like Nino is human this time (^_^)..
Wonder who that spirit is, although I have some ideas XD
Can't wait to read the next chapter (^_^)..
[info]aidill wrote:
Jun. 19th, 2009 07:32 am (UTC)
Yep, he is a humble student in this one... but who or what is Ohno this time? Is he that mysterious man? ^___~

Dun dun duuuuun!

Thank you very much for reading!
[info]lilazngrl11794 wrote:
Jun. 19th, 2009 12:34 am (UTC)
yay! new fic ♥
oh-chan's a spirit :O!
i wonder how this will end :3
[info]aidill wrote:
Jun. 19th, 2009 07:30 am (UTC)
Hahahaha! I'll only say that there will be some surprises ahead! ^___~
Thanks a lot for your comment!
[info]citlecrewolf wrote:
Jun. 19th, 2009 12:46 am (UTC)
Nice, I'll have to watch out for future chapters :) Ohno as the spirit of a cherry tree? Oddly that works for me! *lol* Thanks!
[info]aidill wrote:
Jun. 19th, 2009 07:29 am (UTC)
Yep! The idea of Ohno as the spirit of a cherry tree also works for me... strange but true! ^_____^
I'll try to update as soon as possible!
Thank you very much for reading!
[info]maibachan wrote:
Jun. 19th, 2009 03:08 am (UTC)
NEW FIC!!!!!
Mysterious Ohno with a 'strangely blank expression' ^___^
♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

I may have to marry you.
[info]aidill wrote:
Jun. 19th, 2009 07:27 am (UTC)
Hahahaha! Spacy Oh-chan has returned! But who or what is he?
I hope you like next chapter as well! *hugs*
[info]fara_wakeshima wrote:
Jun. 19th, 2009 06:56 am (UTC)
again. u hanged me to death. haha. emm. let me guess,

" Nino found himself strangely drawn to the stranger’s blank expression and the peaceful aura that surrounded him "

blank expression = oh-chan
peaceful aura = oh-chan

am i right?? (with puppy eyes)

teheeheh. wow, last time, it was nino being ghost. now, em..oh-chan? kyaaaaaa. i hope u update ASAP. i cant wait!

btw, bijilionz of hugs for you for this chapter. teheeeh
[info]aidill wrote:
Jun. 19th, 2009 07:47 am (UTC)
Is that mysterious man Oh-chan? Who or what is he? and what's more important... who killed Laura Palmer? XD (sorry It's an old joke about a TV series that was really popular some many years ago, but there were so many questions that this one should appear among them! XD)

Hahaha! Jokes apart, I'll only say that there will be some surprises in next chapters!

Thanks a lot for reading! *hugs you back*
[info]frksofa wrote:
Jun. 19th, 2009 10:45 am (UTC)
Cooool^^ this story sounds really interesting ^__^
[info]aidill wrote:
Jun. 20th, 2009 07:29 pm (UTC)
Thanks a lot for reading! I hope you enjoy next chapter as well! ^___^
[info]varziel wrote:
Jun. 19th, 2009 01:48 pm (UTC)
new series!! 8D oh. you sure have a thing for ghost/human relationship don't youuuuuu? :D don't worry I love it as well~

very intriguing, can't wait for the next chapter ♥
[info]aidill wrote:
Jun. 20th, 2009 07:32 pm (UTC)
Hahaha! That seems to be the case! >///<
But I think I'll change the theme in my next series (still working on it)! ^___~
Than you very much for your comment!
[info]maryfeamnos wrote:
Jun. 24th, 2009 05:04 pm (UTC)
Hola Aidill ^^
Recien apareciendo
nuevo Fic que lindoooo
me gusto la introducción
Asi me imagino a Nino y Aiba muy buenos amigos
Nino aguantandolo y soportando todas las locuras de Aiba-chan ^^ muy lindoooo
Ahora me voy a leer el proximo capiiii
que tengas un lindo día ohhh pero en España que hora es??
Bendiciones
[info]aidill wrote:
Jun. 25th, 2009 02:17 pm (UTC)
Hola!
Me alegro de que te haya gustado el comienzo de mi nueva historia!
Conseguirá Aiba hacer que Nino crea en la existencia del espíritu del cerezo? Dun dun duuuuuuun
Muchas gracias por tu comentario!
[info]sakuradanielle wrote:
Jun. 30th, 2009 04:00 am (UTC)
Yeah new fic <3

Interesting.. *runs to read chapter 2*
[info]aidill wrote:
Jun. 30th, 2009 06:42 pm (UTC)
Yep! My new fic... spirit based again! XD
[info]sakuradanielle wrote:
Jun. 30th, 2009 10:07 pm (UTC)
Yeah but I like that <3
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